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Framed Aika Ayumu

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FULL VIEW PLEASE!!! :love:


I'm very pleased with this one!! :heart:_:heart: I can't believe how much it took me, but I truly like it!! Except for the hair... I just couldn't make it like I wanted it to be, so I left it like this... ^^;

The only bad thing about this is that you can't appreciate all the eye, and lips and other details in this size! So here are the zooms! =D => [link]

I really hope you guys like it!! :love:


[EDIT] Fixed the colors, they where too saturated! >_<
Now looks better! =D


Seiji => [link]


[EDIT2] Changed it all... Got tired of the previous one, it looked so... Unnatural. I'll soon change the other too.

[EDIT3] Sorry for spamming your inboxes. Changed his eyelashes and fixed his arm according to ~fu-fu's suggestion
Before & After can be found here [link]
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a fantastic base, as far as I can tell.

You mentioned not liking the hair, and I think that might be fixed somewhat by darkening the shading on the left side, maybe highlighting the right a touch more. The shirt might also be lightened a bit on the right.

As for the skin, (And this is something I struggle with myself,) Don't be afraid to take the darks darker, in conjunction with the depth used on the sweater. Also, keep in mind where your curves fall off (the left side of her neck has flat-ish shading right to the edge.)

All up, A gorgeous job, though. The lips have a lot of character, as does the construction of the neck. As for the hair, like it or not, you've got some fantastic flow to it.

Keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />